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"Saved From The Cold" by *CCISoldier:iconCCISoldier:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


In such a world, ever so cruel
I look in the mirror and I see a fool
Chasing dreams, that could never be
From such desires, killing me
I was the beast, with hunger for flesh
Lustful thoughts, putting all hope to rest
Left alone, love lost
Upon the heart, grew frost
Frozen with loneliness within
Looking back at all my sins
All my wrongs
Yet still I long
For a lover
To kill this loneliness, and find another
To feel the warmth of love all around
With such a love we are bound
Seeking the one, for me to hold
Finding that one, saving me from this cold
©2004-2009 *CCISoldier
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Author's Comments

I was trying to think of something to wriet about for an hour or so. >.< I've been kinda out of it as of late. Exhausted for no reason. Well this peom reffers to times when I sought love, and it seemed that I really had a purpose for thsoe feelings. But in reality I was blind to what really was gong on ect. I was the beast hunting down my prey. (I was listeing ot "Amour" by Rammstein, while writting this poem) And to find that one to hold andbe fere from eth chaions athht have held me down for teh longest time. To feel loved. To be saved from the codl tghis world shows so much of. Please enjoy

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~sanpako Nov 16, 2004, 12:48:23 AM
ooh.. on the line "for a lover" I can just hear like a big deep guitar cord or a thundersound... or just a pause if we're not doing anything musical here. it's very dramatic, a nice turning point. this is pretty nice, you've got good rhymes.. it sounds so jaded at the beginning then gets all soft and mushy. which is cute. nice work.

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*CCISoldier Nov 16, 2004, 12:54:01 AM
:blush: Thank you . That means alot to me :blush: :thanks:

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
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~the-nobodies Nov 16, 2004, 6:11:14 AM
*sigh*..... i wish i could be that one for you my love :(..... its very nice tho baby! :kiss:
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*CCISoldier Nov 16, 2004, 9:34:31 AM
Tis all good 8-) you ar ethere whether you kno wit or not :kiss: :heart:

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
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~SorrowTemptress Nov 16, 2004, 4:50:13 PM
Wow now this one speaks to me.Its so nicely written. :clap: :glomp: love it as usual!
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*CCISoldier Nov 16, 2004, 5:18:08 PM
:thanks: THank you so very much been a whiel since I coudl wriet anything, well for me anyway :glomp: :D

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
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~elle2206 Nov 19, 2004, 5:24:32 PM
there is one word to describe this poem and that is...WoW! this is an excellent piece! My favourite lines and the lines I found most inspiring were the first two lines,
"In such a world, ever so cruel
I look in the mirror and I see a fool"
These two lines are amazing! Congratulations for the great piece! Keep it up!
Love,

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Laurn xoxox
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~dejo12788 Dec 7, 2004, 6:55:13 AM
I was the beast, with hunger for flesh

Ive seen you eat a steak I believe it

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*CCISoldier Dec 7, 2004, 8:36:26 AM
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
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