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"Beyond The Blossom" by *CCISoldier:iconCCISoldier:



Into the garden, beneath the trees
Flowers bloom, yet hearts bleed
Beyond the blossoms
There lies the thorns
Love eternal
Forever scorned
To bleed from love
To face the worst
A mental breakdown
Only pain and hurt
Beyond the blossom
It's time to judge
What's its worth
To fall in love
©2004-2009 *CCISoldier
:iconccisoldier:

Author's Comments

This particular poem is a small portion of what I originally wanted to write. But I think it came out rather good for how short it is. But I hope others can enjoy it. (When the thorns oversee the blossom, what becomes of the flower?)

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:iconlithiumx0:
:) i love it! i remember talking baout it yesterday, and yea, the ending question of what it's worth, hmm i guess we can all discuss that later even though im sure we all know each other's views. great poem

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I :heart: Andyroo
Dark desires of the cynic queen
laugher echoes her name
He feels his breath decay
Opens the past to an empty page
Watch his life drain away
:iconccisoldier:
:thanks: Thanky Caiwy. Lots of lovings. But yeah. I agree with you on that will shall discuss taht matter later. And I had fun talking as well as taking a dump in somebody's yard or bing coverd ibn rocks at a park. Blah blah blhah laters Caiwy . Hope you have fun today. Laters

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:iconsorrowtemptress:
this is pretty good! i like your refering with the thorns and blossoms to the emotion in this. very nice! :glomp:
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:glomp: thanky :thanks:

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:iconkitteeisme:
Love it, duder. Love it. Awesome as usual.
Why yes I do recall this conversation....is it worth it...but your heart won't let your mind say it isn't. It won't. :(
And we are all in the coffee/donut shop....and all together let's say:"There's nothing in life but pain."
NONCONFORMIST BITCHES

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You're a tall glass of water aren't you Shagrath?
:icondejo12788:
Oh yeah I remember this one

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~Fate has no mercy for those who wish to oppose it
~:evillaugh: Ah the joys of evil
~ Look at the size of Tifa's breasts! They're destroying our childrens future. - Hillary Clinton
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=P

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:iconccisoldier:
:-)

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."

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