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So many thougts and so many feelings
Leaving scars, that long for healing
I seek comfort in the depths of my heart
To try to take away all theses parts
The hate, the sorrow
Feelingit today, and again tomrrow
So to the graveyard, where secrets lay
Hidden for so long, this is the price I pay
To the tombstones lost loves
So many regrets, I've had enough
I come to settle my past and correct my wrongs
Never again shall I sing suhc a sad song
I leave here on their tombs, all my meisery and woes
And that of a single, black, blood tainted rose
To the love of those I had in the past
Here lies my agony and pain, of which I cast
At the grave, freedom at last
©2004-2009 *CCISoldier
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Author's Comments

To all my past thought to thos ei had crushes on. Such childish crushes. I throw away those feelings. So I can live once more. At one point I held on to those feelinsg. But I feel that without them I'm able tolive and enjoy life to the fullest. And I decided to write this poem. I might kinda mes with iot alittle but yeha. Enjoy.

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:icondyn-:
Very nice...very smooth...

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:star-empty: :invisible: ~Dyn- :invisible: :star-empty:
:iconthe-nobodies:
awww.. baby.. its sooo good.. :heart: i love it
:iconccisoldier:
:thank: Thanks, well appreciated :-)

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:iconccisoldier:
:blush: :thanks: Thanky :heart:

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:iconjamvisdarava:
wow, that's sweet man..

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P.L.E.A.S.E

Peace
--Love
----Empathy
------Advice
--------Security
----------Encouragement
:iconccisoldier:
THanks dude tis all good 8-)

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:icondejo12788:
"And that of a single, black, blood tainted rose"
oh purdy
RYAN!!!
im gonna try to leave a comment on one of your poems a day
kinda been letting them pile up cuz my internet time is limited (but i should have the internet in my first period now)

RYAN!!! Ill get all of your poems read. I promise. You have the word of the Legion master

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~Fate has no mercy for those who wish to oppose it
~:evillaugh: Ah the joys of evil
~ Look at the size of Tifa's breasts! They're destroying our childrens future. - Hillary Clinton
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Hells yeha my ninja :ninja: Tis all good :glomp: :hug: LEGION FORWARD!!!!!!!

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Ich :heart: Hilary Grom
"Nothing in this world worth having comes easy"-Dr. Kelso
"The heart is deceitful above all things."
:iconelle2206:
Amazing work! completely respected piece! I can relate to it a lot and I love the way you use the images of the tombs and graves to where you will leave behind ur sorrows! The most vivid picture i think you painted for me was in the line, "And that of a single, black, blood tainted rose" that completely struck me when I read it! It is an amazing descriptive line! It is almost like the isometric rythym that Shakespeare uses but with 1 extra syllable! Well done! Well deserved praise is due here for this poem!
Love,

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Laurn xoxox

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